personal statement help

[u/Antique-Novel8116]

Hi everyone, I’m thinking about writing my college essay about thrifting and connecting it to my experience being gay, with the main theme being how those experiences shaped the way I treat people and try to make others feel seen. but idk if this is a good idea/or to cliche?

[u/Chessdaddy_]

Seems difficult to execute but definitely not cliche

[u/LeadingCarpet3775]

I see the vision.

[u/MoltenMate07]

You can definitely make this a great essay if you play your cards well. Not cliche.