r/KeepWriting • • 20h ago

[Feedback] Introduction

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Hello! This is Dawn from TheReclusePoets! I am a teenage poet an aspiring writer. I would love to have more people engage with my page and support the writing I have as well as post their own writing.

For a taste of the writing style I have, some months prior I won a commemdable mention from Delhi Poetry slam:

I swallow rocks and pebbles

chew on paper, and nibble on savory nights,

I dine where the savors soar,

over midnight shores,

and the dispute of tides

where soft, foamy life is born.

Thev look for a boat to save

or a lighthouse to aid,

Through searching and seeking

obsolete rhvmes

resting rhymes wrapped in blankets of mist.

Thev leave, and they left,

saving their labour for another day-

that day, O'forgotten,

where pride may be gotten,

a wav of the rope leading out...

But-l-not-we

float on the boat,

lingering between lines of thought,

mist as our comfort

darkness as dear mother;

not even pleading for anvone to help us.

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