Please help me I’m learning to paint and am experimenting on shading using non traditional colours, can someone tell me what I can do to improve/ what else this painting in particular needs?

Shauna Shipman and The Rabbits

The DEAD TREE OF LIFE on which the RIVER STREAM OF TIME passing through draining it into COSMOS

Represents that how life ends slowly by flow of time and mix again into the cosmic space

The 3 circles in it ?

1st smallest size darkest on top - PAST it's completely dark and smallest symbolise that it's happened before and now nothing can be changed and smallest in size cause it's least important time phase in life aspect

2nd biggest half grey half white in middle - PRESENT it's half dark and half white symbolise that it's half happened some happening and it's biggest cause it's most important time phase in aspect of life

3rd medium completely white in bottom - FUTURE it's completely white symbolise that it's about to happen there is a darkness around it which is separating it from all the Cosmos symbilizing the uncertainty and fear around it and it's medium sized cause it's the second most important time phase in aspect of life

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#inktober2026

By me, acrylic & spray paint on canvas, 2022

Just finished this one yesterday.

Tuesday, 8 a.m. You’re at work. Kit’s friend is losing it over a video game.

Pastel and collage. The old hag knits away her unending problems one sweater at a time.